Post production- class feedback on rough cut edit

Rory-Large variety of great shots and there was a very clear narrative. Titles could be on screen for longer and some of the voice overs are quieter than the background music.
Sophie-Slow down and improve your titles.
Rossi-Extend title length, include film title and allow so can hear voiceover at end. Good narrative.
Lily-Lower the volume of the voice over, otherwise great aesthetic shots.
Emily-Really liked the shots, possibly different font for the writing.
Skye-Make the speech louder and clearer.
Claudia-Make written text on screen last longer.

We will take all this feedback into consideration and continue with our final edit. We also received more feedback from Skye and Sophie, so we will carefully listen to there advice and make the changes.